Alison and Darrel.

(whats the story?)

"Look i can see he has hurt you, i see this all the time, You will be safe where he cant find you" i said confused
"It should not be a problem but a sulition" i said

(i dont know HIS STORY )(But He Stole ALison and left her brother max in a diff citie)(He rapes her and hurts her .SHe wants her brother max)
Alison:"it is a solution of one problem bbut not another "i sya

"thats ok tell me and ill fix it simple. Hes not really your brother i can see that. But your hurting inside missing someone." i said looking closley at her.

Alison:i look around(i changed the staory a little unless you dont wanna have to do ncis and bla bla bla)
"My brother Max ................ Max Wright"i say

"Ok look i know a few people ill call them and have them find him for you is that ok. Will you go to the ranch with Ella? and stay hidden, it wont be hard she has a huge property and LOADS of horses. and you could work maybe at the new riding school the owner will need hands soon." i said trying to encorage her

i smile "y-y-es i can but I'll be with Max soon right>?"

I beam "Ill call my friend right now" i said writing down his name
Max Wright
Ella comes to the door
"Ready?"

Alison:i smile"yes"i walk to her catious when i walk out the door

ELLA: "Shopping first" i smiled and drove to the town


Maddy: Picks up the phone and calls NCIS

(your the reception in ncis ill post the ring ring ring there))

Alison:i smile"ok"i get in the front seat

I smile and park in the parking lot
(make a thread hey in the town lol)

kk)

done

alright

so how do we go about bringing him in to this?

well i dunno i thought we should hav ewaited until d had ran and kidnapped ali and ncis had to get her and then sh ewas reunited with her brother)

(that can still happen )

kk ill make it so pause the max thing so we can let her have a least one night at ellas house