Storm Star brings a mare.

Storm star trotted in with his mare behind him,

Earth trotted up behind him flicking her tail with every step.Every time she took a step she let out an smell completely irresistable to a stallion, then looked back at Storm Star and smiled. she then went to a palm tree and layed down to take a nap

He watched her smiling.

she doesn't sleep, instead she watches Storm Star
(can i call him Storm?)

(yes!)

Storm. Speaks to other mare then gos to Earth

I trotted up to the 2 and nuzzled my stallion

Meet my lead mare Earth. (remember he just asked her to join the herd beacuse he was already with her.

I smiled"Hello im Trinity nive to meet you."

He smiled glad the two were getting along well. 9she's not planning anything right? Like making him choose her to like better?)

(nope she is very inosent and nice)
I smiled and looked at the two."Im gonna go take a walk."I trotted off and vanished into the trees

(good cause that happened on a site once!) He watched her leave then turned back to his mare.

Earth got up and went over to Storm and nuzzled him, then rested her head on his back and sighed

He flicked his tail swishing away flies.

she then lifted her head up,"I wonder what Earth is doing right now?" she sighed (remember, Earth got captured by people)

(yeah) she's probably happy. Humans aren 't that bad.

"Still.. I'm still worried about her.And i miss her alot." she said "I wish she hadn't got captured." she started crying

It's ok. he said. c'mon let's go find her.

her head shot straight up and she said, "You mean you'll go with me to find her, even though she's owned!"

I galloped in and reared.I ran to Earth"Earth come i know where youre sister is!"

she quickly turned around at the mention of her sister. "Really! You know where she is?!" she said excitedly

I flicked my tail"Yes come!!"I started to canter towards snowy herd

(hannah she got captured) Storm turned to his mare. I'll help you find her.

she looked at the two stallions then followed the other one as he went to Snowy Herd (winter98 she escaped from them)

(oh) Storm followed his mares.

Earth was so excited, she accidentally let off the scent of heat, then stopped, knowing that the other stallion might want to breed her instead of Storm being the father of her first foal.